School project.

[routierracing]

This was a project I did for class. The assignment was to make a magazine ad for the product of our choosing. My teacher loved it. But I know you guys are a a littler harder to please. lol

 

[mikey-Oh]

not bad for a class assignment... keep plugging away and push the design skills while you're there. anything's possible with carte blanche and i suggest you unleash.

concerning the ad, feel like the copperplate conflicts with the logo lettering. also the ellipse is lost against the white background.

 

[HulkSmash]

that font isnt really working.
and.. all caps does't really work.

 

[speedmedia]

I like the concept, strognly dislike the fonts used.... It will come with time.

Thanks,
Kurt

 

[routierracing]

font

do you guys have any other font suggestions?

 

[SignManiac]

Too busy. It lacks any layout at all. Just lettering stuck on top of a photo. I don't think you need the logo on their twice. just the tattoo is enough and text is all too big.

 

[routierracing]

So then any constructive advice on the direct to move forward with it? Part of the assignment was for it to be a photoshop project with vector illustrator elements.

 

[Pat Whatley]

I would have used a different company logo for the tattoo.

 

[routierracing]

Thanks! Ill try mocking one up with a generic company for the tattoo.

 

[SignManiac]

This is how I would approach it. More minimal. Keep the message together instead of filling up the entire photo, plus it's less distracting from the image.

The company name being the tattoo, all the information is there and since its a tattoo, the viewer is going to focus on reading that anyway.