RED BARN

[Jackflush]

This design has takien so long and srynin about it. Any one see how to make this thing commercial? I cant see thye final yet. the Shop is a thrift store/ antique shop. has alot of gifts and planty of antiques. Glass lamps chandeliers... Old axes old wrenches. Gold diggin equiptment. And the owner wants it to say "ask for Bea!"

ANy help will surely be appreciated.,

 

[SignosaurusRex]

1. You have too many different fonts in use. Keep it to no more than three. Repeat the use of LHF Spaz in the
"Sh...Shovel" line.

2. Open up the character spacing in the "Antiques - Treasures" line and use a "&" rather than a dash. I would also
make that line a larger size.

3. Get rid of the display font used in the address and use a simpleton style. Something like "Cowboy
Optemaw" or even "Comic Sans" if need be.

....just my 2¢ for starters....

 

[player]

Perspective on the barn would go a long way.

 

[Andy D]

LOL, love their tag line, I would go there just for that.