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[Marco]

Need HELP ran into wall with this one. Banner 230" by 18". Advertising hair salon.

 

[GCI DIGITAL IMAGING]

What do you need help with?

 

[Marco]

Input - Const Criticsm or design ideas.
Ty.

 

[J Hill Designs]

needs more contrast...thats one long skinny banner...whats intended view distance?

 

[Marco]

The banner will be located above storefront along main street.

 

[FelixCG]

Maybe add some lighter red tones for highlights on the imagery to accent it, but without taking too much attention away from the text?

 

[cmykpro]

If you are asking for a critique I would honestly have to say you might want to consider starting over. The red is WAY too over saturated and there are no tones to break it up. You need to make it appealing to the eye not give someone eye strain.

 

[bob]

Drive a stake through the heart of your Copperplate font files. This type face should never be used much larger than 12 point on a business card for an accountant. Never on a sign.

Too much red, too little text. Not in word count, rather in boldness.

 

[2B]

If you are asking for a critique I would honestly have to say you might want to consider starting over. The red is WAY too over saturated and there are no tones to break it up. You need to make it appealing to the eye not give someone eye strain.

WAY TOO MUCH RED

 

[Biker Scout]

You should be able to read the thumbnail attachment without clicking on it. Contrast, Contrast, Contrast!

 

[TammieH]

Drive a stake through the heart of your Copperplate font files. This type face should never be used much larger than 12 point

Thank you!!!!!

 

[Marco]

Good critics here. I will work on it some more. No more copper, less red, more contrast. TY all.

 

[Marco]

New Banner

Redesign. Any advice / design ideas is greatly appreciated. Banner size is 234"x19".

 

[cmykpro]

Getting better! The phone number needs to be more pronounced and the cheesy clip art is questionable however it is a vast improvement over your last rendering.

 

[Jillbeans]

Is this just a temporary sign until they can get a permanent fascia sign?
This last one looks better, but I would make the areas that you have blue be a cream color. The red and blue look clashy together.
I'd lose the weird clip art.
The tagline could be a bit bigger, perhaps stacked, and I would put the phone number on the door of the business, where the hours were listed (if it's a glass door)

 

[Marco]

Hi Jill, yes is a temporary banner (2-3mos.)
Anyone have thoughts for a font.
Anyone recommend a letterhead font?

 

[Marco]

Location

This is the storefront. The banner will be placed above storefront windows.

 

[shoresigns]

Separate the red and blue. They clash when they touch, so they generally need to be separated like in the Pepsi logo.

 

[jen.reelez]

Is this just a temporary sign until they can get a permanent fascia sign?
This last one looks better, but I would make the areas that you have blue be a cream color. The red and blue look clashy together.
I'd lose the weird clip art.
The tagline could be a bit bigger, perhaps stacked, and I would put the phone number on the door of the business, where the hours were listed (if it's a glass door)

I agree with you Jill.
I look forward to see the modifications on the signs from your witty tips! :Big Laugh

 

[Biker Scout]

That town looks boring... how about give it some edge.