Bar logo...2nd Try

[forty9]

Hello all,
I posted the first version of this a few months back and it went on the back burner for a while. The client seemed to like the original, but wanted some changes.

I am back on it again and here is what I have. Let me know your thoughts.

It is a biker/country bar. I understand the two fonts may clash a bit, but that is what the client is wanting to convey, a mixture between rural and biker concepts.

Fire away!

 

[HulkSmash]

look good, just a bit too detailed for a logo - in my opinion.

 

[ColoPrinthead]

The red barn seems to distract from the other elements imo. I would consider filling the white outline on "Country" with a reversed gradient of the letters fill.

 

[Biker Scout]

Show me in Black & White.

 

[Gino]

Yeah, looks good. However, for some reason, those rests look like a bicycles pedals. Now that's all I see..... bicycle pedals.

 

[Biker Scout]

Yeah, highway pegs not a necessary element to convey bike/chopper/bagger. Not everyone has them.

 

[player]

Did you try a chrome motor where the pedals are?

 

[TammieH]

isn't duct tape country chrome? LOL

 

[the graphics co]

I find the detail in the tire to be extremely distracting, maybe tone down the highlight a bit.

 

[Jacob]

IMHO Kill the pegs and make the barn bigger to be the total outside line. easier to sew, make stickers, light, etc.