Critic Magnet

[Jackflush]

The house is the clients logo that he wants on it. I should probably put in the city/state.

 

[J Hill Designs]

hmm

 

[signrios]

in my humble opinion i think the top one looks good,
the only thing i would do center construction or spread it all over the black stripe.

 

[J Hill Designs]

first one

 

[Jackflush]

 

[TheSnowman]

I was thinkin' bottom.

 

[Jillbeans]

I prefer the bottom as well.
I don't like how the tagline is in the corner of the top one.
Here's a suggestion, not sure if the CONSTRUCTION had to be yellow.
I would not add the city and state as that is too much info on a small sign.
And I think an ellipsis is nicer than a slash.
Love....Jill

 

[auto accents sc]

Hey Jill, I like that script . which font is that?
Jamey

 

[kev3232]

too many fonts

 

[bob]

Jill's is a hell of a lot better but it's still a dreary looking thing.

If it were me, I'd drop the tag line, no one is ever going to read it much less care, de-emphasize the roof line by emphasizing the 'ABSOLUTE', make 'Construction' part of the name rather than some sort of add-on, and make a more effective use of color.

A quickie...

 

[signmeup]

Bob makes some good points.

 

[jiarby]

I like this one... already has built in brand recognition.. LOL!

Make sure he has a good lawyer!

 

[Jackflush]

Simple and stunning designs... thank you. I like that font you used jill..! A quickie? Going to the right side of my brain is going to be a long walk. Thanks Bob.

 

[OldPaint]

i like bobs..............hes good for something....hehehehehehe

 

[Jillbeans]

Bob sure cleaned things up.
I think maybe silver metallic would have looked nice rather than the red, but he prioritized it all quite nicely.
My font used (like most bob used) is from Arthur Vanson.
It's his newest, Flash Script.