Layout critique request.. :)

[Raulrdz]

Nice design...great color usage.

 

[signmeup]

I am not saying it should, it is a very important part of the info. My thoughts are based on, collectively the type bullet points are looking sqaushed, to close to the border areas of the sign, and the line spacing of the second bullet point is way to close.

Just my thoughts buddy!

As I said nice design needs a little tweak.

I get it. I'd make some other part of the sign smaller to uncroud the text.

 

[Rising]

Signmeup.... Yeah I agree on that, maybe the map could have a small trim down.

I looked at your website too, some great work there. I lived in LA back in 1994, was there for nigh on two years, I used to really enjoy sign foam signage, making it, installing it, and marveling at the finished product. I didnt do the talented part you do daily, but cut lettering from templates I did. No-one in the UK uses it at all, its hardly even available, some have tried but hasnt took off.

Good work

Steve

 

[signmeup]

Thanks for the compliments. Here is a link to a UK sign shop that does HDU stuff.
http://www.cloversigns.co.uk/ They appear to be a dealer or division of Danthonia Signs from Australia.

 

[rjpjr]

...the top left portion of the sign (the top of Ohio) is CNC cut out of the substrate, so it won't just be 'white'.

Sorry about that, I misread the post. I read it as though the whole state was going to be cut to shape and then applied to a secondary 4'x8' surface. Oops

With that in mind...

 

[GypsyGraphics]

I might to see the pages torn off the calendar rather than three calendars and on rjpjr's layout.

 

[Rising]

Perfect rjpjr! Just a colour choice for the customer, but for me I like the red bottom version as it makes the info more prevalent.

 

[vinylbarry]

The red one does look much better seems the red goes with the brown better then the light blue.