the concept is very good. I love the tree and the band. the font used for landscaping has a forced length which has distorted it so the the down strokes and the cross strokes really show the distortion. it's better to use a smaller letter height or a condensed font than to squish a font. there also is kerning issues. the font used for William isn't very good. the color also seems weak. a stronger, darker green wouldn't need the black outline and would look so much better.