no offense... but what is that last picture supposed to be?
Call the 'Vector Doctor'
Yu'll have a perfect file.
I'm sure you are much much better at it than I am and probably one of the best but this file is really bad. I attached it at a larger size so you can see how bad it really is.
There other post (search the forum)about redrawing using tracing paper then scanning and vertorize in your design program. This would take 15 to 30 minutes to do in CorelX3......or call The Vector Doctor.
what programs do you have
... several these days create vector files
also there are ppl who charge for this service ..
.13 folds