Shop Van Wrap Critiques

[SignStudent]

I'm excited to finally have a shop van and I want to wrap it. Gathered some inspiration from Dan Antonelli's work and this is what I came up with. Thoughts/suggestions?

 

[DesireeM]

Looks great! Not much to improve imo. Maybe some small tweaks but overall it's attractive, simple and eye-catching. Nice color scheme.

One thing though - not really an issue but more of a bug...is there a reason the logo is on an angle? It's so clean and serious it seems like it would suit it more to be straight like everything else.

 

[bikecomedy]

Looks delightful... Make the company name much bigger. Brand Brand Brand

 

[SignStudent]

One thing though - not really an issue but more of a bug...is there a reason the logo is on an angle? It's so clean and serious it seems like it would suit it more to be straight like everything else.

Yeah I wasn't sure if I should keep it level like everything else or tilt it to follow the curve of the white stripe behind it.

 

[JBusch260]

One thing though - not really an issue but more of a bug...is there a reason the logo is on an angle? It's so clean and serious it seems like it would suit it more to be straight like everything else.

Agreed! Looks fantastic. Can we see a draft where it is straight?

 

[SignStudent]

Looks delightful... Make the company name much bigger. Brand Brand Brand

I tried to make it as big as possible without cutting off any parts of the logo. You think I could get away with chopping off part with the window or the wheel well?

 

[DesireeM]

Looks delightful... Make the company name much bigger. Brand Brand Brand

Joking? It's literally as big as it could possible be without getting cut off by the wheel wells.

 

[SignStudent]

Agreed! Looks fantastic. Can we see a draft where it is straight?

Here ya go.

 

[DesireeM]

Here ya go.

Yep. That's the stuff.

 

[formanek]

NO TILT! May look decent on one side but weird on the other. What I used to always tell my HS art students..... if it is going to lean it better be for a reason and not look like an accident.

 

[SignStudent]

NO TILT!

Okay, no tilt it is. I agree with everyone and will keep it straight.

 

[Jacob]

definitely better straight

 

[bikecomedy]

Yep no joke... The suggestion is to increase the size of your name and reduce the size of the word "signs". The why is the brand, "your company name" is missed in this layout. suggestions form the forum and experience of doing your way.... probably cost me thousands... many thanks to Signs101 for setting me straight.... BTW anyone seen the ?

 

[nikdoobs]

Looks nice. I agree, no tilt. I think it would look more professional with just the logo. Remove all the white text.

 

[DesireeM]

Yep no joke... The suggestion is to increase the size of your name and reduce the size of the word "signs". The why is the brand, "your company name" is missed in this layout. suggestions form the forum and experience of doing your way.... probably cost me thousands... many thanks to Signs101 for setting me straight.... BTW anyone seen the ?

I think it's a good thing to have emphasis on the word "signs". It's not like he sells sterling silver cutlery or something. His company name is "Sterling Signs" all together... Not "Sterling" ...by the way we sell signs.

 

[Pixels Are Bad Mmmkay?]

I think it's a good thing to have emphasis on the word "signs". It's not like he sells sterling silver cutlery or something. His company name is "Sterling Signs" all together... Not "Sterling" ...by the way we sell signs.

Exactly. Whether to emphasize "Sterling" or "SIGNS" would depend a lot on how long you've been in business and how well the Sterling name is known by the locals. If the company has been in business twenty years, then it might be wise to emphasize Sterling more, otherwise I think it's good as it is.

 

[SignStudent]

Exactly. Whether to emphasize "Sterling" or "SIGNS" would depend a lot on how long you've been in business and how well the Sterling name is known by the locals. If the company has been in business twenty years, then it might be wise to emphasize Sterling more, otherwise I think it's good as it is.

That's how I feel about it. We've been in business for a few years but we're still relatively unknown. We still get people asking "did you just open"?

 

[Speedsterbeast]

I would like to see one more thin blue stripe running with the white- perhaps a shade between. And the bullet points a little smaller so it clutters less. But otherwise nice an clean

 

[Jeff]

Looks good but I never understand putting call or phone by a number... I'm pretty sure people know what to do with the number.

 

[Christian @ 2CT Media]

Looks good but I never understand putting call or phone by a number... I'm pretty sure people know what to do with the number.

I think that hearkens back to days of fax only lines.