Destroy me as usual..

[laserman70]

Here is a logo for a local fencing company. They mainly deal with wooden fences.
have at it and me..
I know you all enjoy beating us beginners up lol...
thanks as always for the help..

 

[Jillbeans]

The fence posts look sinister, and crooked, which is not how I would want my fence company represented.

The slant of the initials is fighting with the fence too.
And there is no contrast on FENCING, which is (to me) the most important part.
But I do like you.
Love.....Jill

 

[grampa dan]

Great effort! Try the squint test and think priority of copy.. I would suggest perhaps making 'FENCING' a little bigger. You may want to knock back the color of the pickets, but keeping them in the picture.

Just my two cents.

-grampa dan

 

[MachServTech]

I agree with Jill. Nice execution on the fence pickets though!

 

[laserman70]

This was my first one.

 

[Pat Whatley]

That one looks better but the effects are killing me. The TK reminds me of jello jigglers for some reason.

 

[laserman70]

no effects more attention to fencing lol

 

[SignManiac]

Far too many conflicting angles fighting one another. Makes my left eye twitch..

 

[signcrafters london]

You say they do mostly wood fences? Unless they specialize in elaborate, ornamental iron fencing, I'd stay away from the fancy fonts. I think you need to pick something that is strong, bold and easy-to-read.

 

[weaselboogie]

Get rid of the filters and DON'T STRETCH YOUR TEXT!

 

[Mason]

Get rid of the filters and DON'T STRETCH YOUR TEXT!

What he said!

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

I like the 1st one .. with a bit of tweeking, like straight up fencing, maybe panel the word fencing for contast.
The 2nd and 3rd ones are nice but not as exciting as the 1st.

keep at it your on to a greart start

 

[SignLogic]

Get rid of the filters and DON'T STRETCH YOUR TEXT!

+1

 

[Malkin]

Drop shadows too strong by about half...

 

[Pat Whatley]

Fencino?

 

[Mosh]

The key is look at it 15 feet away and you will see it SUCKS. This is the biggest problem "designers" have.

 

[John Butto]

just the opposite

The key is look at it 15 feet away and you will see it SUCKS. This is the biggest problem "designers" have.

2 six packs and 15 feet away and then it aint so bad...

 

[visual800]

I like it for a trade show banner but it aint gonna work on the streets. to much going on, to many filters, tone down. I dont so much mind the crooked wood, shows a little playful ness

 

[Farmboy]

I agree with signcrafters, also keep in mind how they will use the design. Can this be screened easily if the company wants to have shirts done?

 

[Farmboy]

This is a veeeery rough concept. Just throwing it out as an idea.

 

[signmeup]

I think you should try a different font. I think Boston Truckstyle is a bit over the top for this. Try fencing as the biggest word.