Neon Wrap Layout

[jc1cell]

I made this initial concept and am liking the direction is going. It still needs the contact information on there so it will probably change since the space is limited.

Just wanted to get your views on the concept and direction I have taken this.

jc

 

[txsurfer]

I think you need to remember what you are trying to sell, or advertise? It needs to be Quick and Clean!

 

[bayshorecreations]

I don't like it much, need to get your point across at 50+ MPH with a wrap.
Big and simple is what I usually try and stick to.

Is a country sign anything like country fried steak?

 

[HulkSmash]

omg your vinyl is peeling off already!!

 

[laserman70]

my eye goes straight to the red.
Logo is looked at last.

 

[Jillbeans]

The "logo" reads really awkwardly once you notice it.
I'd re-think it.
Or if you must use that do not rotate it.
Love....Jill

 

[jc1cell]

Point taken on all accounts.

Thanks to all replies. Anyone have a drawing board around. I need to go back to one and I tossed mine.

jc

 

[Dan Antonelli]

Brand, brand, brand. It all starts from there. If the current one is weak in foundation, it's hard to build anything solid thereafter.

Which is one of the reasons why we rarely design any wraps for clients who's brands we don't create. Because in all likelihood, their brand has nothing to build from. Of course there's ton's of guys who will, but that ain't us.

Here's a few ideas to show how well the brand is integrated, visible and easy to discern from a distance. http://www.graphicd-signs.com/portfolio-vehicle-advertising

My last article from SignCraft also deals with the subject. Can be downloaded here: http://www.graphicd-signs.com/about-published-works

Hope that helps. Don't worry - its always hardest to design your own stuff.

 

[jc1cell]

Ha, ha, ha...Laughing but don't know if I should cry Dan: It's not for me!!! Ha, ha.

I would love to change is logo ( even thought I probably would botch that as well ). I'm a clear example of this new thread unfortunately: http://www.signs101.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=82522

I try and some things come out well. But others, well, you've seen plenty of times.

I will go to your links and read and see if anything sinks in.

Thanks a bunch Dan. I'm too hard headed not to keep at it.

jc

 

[Ponto]

...never was a fan of incorporating "gimmicks" into a design.......

JP

 

[Dan Antonelli]

Ha, ha, ha...Laughing but don't know if I should cry Dan: It's not for me!!! Ha, ha.

I would love to change is logo ( even thought I probably would botch that as well ). I'm a clear example of this new thread unfortunately: http://www.signs101.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=82522

I try and some things come out well. But others, well, you've seen plenty of times.

I will go to your links and read and see if anything sinks in.

Thanks a bunch Dan. I'm too hard headed not to keep at it.

jc

Don't cry. And for laughs I should post my work from 20 years ago. We all start somewhere. Let he who once didn't suck themselves cast the first stone.

Work on getting better than you were the day before is the best advice I can offer.