Which Design Feedback

[Pinfinity]

I have designed the attached biz card of which I'd like to use the elements shown. I've made some subtle revisions and would appreciate some comments on which you would choose out of the three or what changes if any. Thanx much

 

[SignManiac]

I like B...

 

[tattoo.dan]

I like c the best probably. A is good too though.

 

[mortil]

i like C as the background dont stop in the middle of the card going over to black . it felt wierd.

 

[Jillbeans]

C if I had to pick one.
But they all seem a bit weak and slightly disjointed.
Love.....Jill
Here's a suggestion, not set in stone, but based on what you already have.

 

[Locals Find!]

I like the Attorney at Law w/ New Jersey from A and I prefer C for everything else.

However, why would you use Banker scales for an Attorney?

Wouldn't Lady justice holding the scales be a better representation?

Something more along these lines

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Agrees with Jill..

1st and 2nd suggest to client ..drop the cell # and gmail addy replace with ..dot com

bold up name, make panel for attorney more visible use gold in name or attorney
Tighten up the space between lower copy and scales

 

[John Butto]

adtehia suggestion

the lady

I like the Attorney at Law w/ New Jersey from A and I prefer C for everything else.

However, why would you use Banker scales for an Attorney?

Wouldn't Lady justice holding the scales be a better representation?

Something more along these lines

 

[Deaton Design]

I like C also. The gold scales makes it jump a little more.

 

[jiarby]

who would use a lawyer with a g-mail or yahoo address?? No website or domain name... sheesh, they cost $9/year for the name and $60/year (or less) for decent shared hosting. There is NO REASON for a business or professional (or ANYONE) to not have their own domain name.

Save gmail/yahoo accounts for posting on forums and forwarding

 

["Deposit Please"]

I like C the best. I would tweak it from there.

 

[thinksigns]

Have the scale and the address trade places on Option A. Text flush right.

 

[Pinfinity]

Jiarby....i agree with you about the additional information. I had actually discussed this with the attorney and go figure, he feels its important for him to have the additional information. I feel like you, it gives the feeling of less professional business

 

[Pinfinity]

thanx guys...I'm making some changes based on all the feedback...appreciate it!