Gutter Business Logo

[firstclassvinyls]

I was looking for some critique on this logo I created for this company. My main goal was to keep the costumers vision and a little bit of my touch to it . I also kept in consideration cost for other advertising products. All critiques are welcome I am not married to my work.

 

[HDvinyl]

Black and white looks good.

 

[Locals Find!]

I read that as "MERICAN SEAMLESS GUTTERS". I had to really focus to figure out the "A" part. I haven't had my first cup of coffee yet. So, if the consumer has to think about it at all. It's not that great.

Artistically it's nice but, I don't see the public getting that right off to bat.

 

[Marlene]

I see where you ar going using the peak of the roof as an "A" but not too sure it works. My mind filled in the "A" when I read it as the word is easy to reconize but I did have to really have to stare at it to see the "A" with that said, it could work as I did fill in the letter and other may too or it might need to be re-worked some so the peak/A are clearer

 

[Jillbeans]

I'd make the point of the roof tighter if you are going to try to make it look like an A.
I read it as "Merican" which is OK if you're a redneck.
Change the font on Seamless gutters, make it non-italic and decrease the size.
Love....Jill

 

[HDvinyl]

It's Merican, not Merican't. (Mosh)

 

[TheSnowman]

I read it as "Merican" which is OK if you're a redneck.

Must be why I didn't notice anything wrong! Whenever me and my friends are feeling all patriotic, it's always stated that "This is Mercia!"

 

[HDvinyl]

Guess my eyes are playing tricks on me.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Agrees with Jillbeans
1st thing I saw was it was way wide for a logo.
2nd thing was the lower copy did not flow well with American, also the copy should never be longer then the main copy always less.
3rd thing confuses me are gutters attached on angles of roofs, but may not be the point when the A is more important here to understand.

I do like where you are going & how you started out good going

 

[firstclassvinyls]

Awesome guys I will go back to the drawing board appreciate the hints !!!!

 

[Gino]

Yowsa, I never realized I totally missed the 'A'.

I think the star in the second 'A' seals the deal and makes it American without even knowing it. I believe it serves the purpose, but aesthetically, you might wanna take their suggestions about making the 'A' more pronounced.

 

[John Butto]

watchin Blue Bloods

 

[OldPaint]

use of the A as a roof outline is a good idea.......BUT YOU NEED TO HAVE MORE PITCH TO THE ROOF. and that piece of what ever between the roof and the M..put a break between the m and it......or...LOOSE IT)))
GOOGLE IS YOUR FRIEND:
GUTTER LOGOS:
https://www.google.com/search?biw=1...8.8.0....0...1c.1.28.img..4.4.457.x6U1EIG9KUw
ROOFER LOGOS:
https://www.google.com/search?biw=1...7.7.0....0...1c.1.28.img..3.4.437.BGoYqM1W4_Y

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Likes ..John Buttos design & most of the gutter logos did not come close to professionally done

 

[firstclassvinyls]

I think you guys ideas are excellent and a good way to re-focus however, my customer loves the design and after I told him the changes I could make if he would like he looked at me like he would kill me if I change it so I appreciate the input from everyone but this one is a wrap.