Organic Lawn Care

[neato]

This is a side business my wife is starting with a friend. Just playing around with an idea.

Thoughts? Critiques? Hate it? Love it? Scrap it? Start over? Go with it?

 

[SqueeGee]

Hi Phillip!

My suggestions would be to stick with green on the grass and lose the root on "b"(looks like a "p" at first glance).

Good luck!

 

[Letterbox Mike]

#1, but darkened up like #2.

 

[jfiscus]

Hi Phillip!

My suggestions would be to stick with green on the grass and lose the root on "b"(looks like a "p" at first glance).

Good luck!

Just move those roots over to the "Y".
I like the green grass better than dead brown grass.

 

[thinksigns]

I know they are cliches - maybe a ladybug or dog that would give the idea you don't use harsh chemicals. That's what I think of when I see "organic yard care". The logo doesn't seem as playful as the name.

 

[Circleville Signs]

I think the direction is fine, but you may want to find a different font - unless your wife's only target client is residential.

 

[Jillbeans]

Read the b as a p but other than that it looks earthy and organic.
Love....Jill

 

[HulkSmash]

top one. Nice job

 

[Mike Paul]

Top w/ the green grass. But I would drop the gas-less mowing.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Agrees the green one without the gas less mowing and roots on B

if ya get work electric mower or hand push mower it will get old fast unless electric is battery powered and large enough or ya convert to hydroxy

 

[briankb]

Hi Phillip!

My suggestions would be to stick with green on the grass and lose the root on "b"(looks like a "p" at first glance).

Good luck!

+1

 

[SignManiac]

Top gets my vote!

 

[OldPaint]

lkjhgfdds"

 

[visual800]

I like it. bouncy and playful not too serious

 

[GAC05]

Agrees the green one without the gas less mowing and roots on B

if ya get work electric mower or hand push mower it will get old fast unless electric is battery powered and large enough or ya convert to hydroxy

Maybe he is bringing in the really organic grass cutters....

I like the green layout.

wayne k
guam usa

 

[signmeup]

Bottom one but with green grass and green "the". Too many leaves and roots. I'd strip it down to one of each. The leaves on "the" and maybe the root on the "Y" as suggested earlier... or the "S".

 

[signmeup]

lkjhgfdds"

What's wrong with OP?

 

[Marlene]

I like it. the only thing I'd like to see is one set of roots and one set of leaves as it seems like it would stand out better than multi roots/leaves and would have more impact.

 

[neato]

Guys, you have given some excellent input. Thank you.

Here's where we're at...

 

[signmeup]

What about fading the text from brown on the left to green on the right with one set of leaves and a root on the last letter?