I looked at this first time it was up. and then passed on givign an opinion.
I looked at it again just now. It still looks all messed up. Why would someone spend that kind of money and use a composition such as that? Has it been tested? No, I think not.
That add leads no where. It is confusing as to what you are selling. Are you selling canvas? Are you selling a game?
All those angled lines of text lead right off the page. They are so confusing that the eye will not look at them. They look like speed stripes.
The head line is a dead line. Dead as in road kill. There is no compelling reason to read past the head line. There is not a single trigger word in the head line.
The sub head line is just as dead. There is no emotional draw in that ad anywhere.
Your "8x10 canvas prints today" means nothing. So what? Why would that matter. IT does nothing to scratch the itch of the purchaser. You are selling memories. Why are you NOT appealing to point instead of appealing to the cheapness of some ink on some
paper?
Whats that kid got to do with it? Its just him? who is he?
There is no call to action either from him or the entire ad. The background on the pic is distracting with all those heads looking out and away. Boring..
The perspective on that one line of text is off.
And finally, leading them away on a internet chase game is a proven loser. No one is goona look up websites to track down FREE shipping code. What makes me say that? Well, I am Mr. average reasonable shopper and I would never play that game. Why in the world would any one want to lead a prospect away from the focus of an ad? The ad is supposed to get orders. Not lead the client on a Easter egg hunt to save a buck...
Sorry. But expecting thousands of responses from this is not goona happen in my uneducated opinion.