New Logo, B/C Crit.

[dlndesign]

I have re-worked it since my last post, here is the updated and a proposed layout for the b/c, let me know what you think. thanks.

 

[SignManiac]

I actually kind a like it...Not your typical BC.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

yes looks nice ... but I would do some kerning on signorg myself .. since I design for billboard readable 1st

 

[luggnut]

i remember your first go at this ... the new one here is way better

i might make the fade in SignOrg not go to such a dark blue ... or maybe make it solid white?

but its a pretty good job,

 

[dlndesign]

Thanks for all the great feedback, I would like to hear if anyone else has any crits on how to make it better.

Thanks

 

[Jillbeans]

The "g" needs nudged closer to the "r" in "Org".
Maybe it's my monitor but the colors look really washed out/muddy.
Light sources seem all over the place.
"SIGNS & PRINTING" would look better in white.
Love....Jill

 

[Marlene]

that looks nice! just fix the kerning as suggested. I like the repeat fade of the crossed brush and knife.

 

[jcuminale]

how bout "signs &" up top, "printing" on bottom...empty space kind of weird

 

[dlndesign]

just a bump if there are any others that can throw some input my way.

 

[omgsideburns]

SignOrgy!

 

[signgal]

how bout "signs &" up top, "printing" on bottom...empty space kind of weird

I agree and the first thing I see is the big grey space between the handles. Maybe an est. year or something there? Also, from a typical customer POV I think the info on the back too tiny to read.

 

[dlndesign]

here are some updates

 

[ProWraps]

SignOrgy!

ha, thats all i can see now when i look at it.

 

[Jillbeans]

Now the knife and brush need a black outline to tie them in.
Colors look a lot better and I like the SIGNS PRINTING broken up.
But now you have a big black hole in the bottom.
Not sure how to fix that.

 

[dlndesign]

 

[signgal]

Now the knife and brush need a black outline to tie them in.
Colors look a lot better and I like the SIGNS PRINTING broken up.
But now you have a big black hole in the bottom.
Not sure how to fix that.

thank you.... changing it from grey to black didn't help it. that's the first thing i see.