How's this Look

[langecustomgraphics]

This is a something I have been working on for a moto racing team. I put team and racing in there, but it looked too busy. what do you guys think? Thanks for your opinion.

 

[artbot]

looking very cool... the only thing that jumps out at me is the spacing. maybe if the "and" was straight across you could tie the negative space in the F and A? you got the top and bottom of the F and A long and straight. i think the "and" should keep that motif. ...classic antique motor company meets hot rod. right now it's a bit too much hot rod.

 

[TheSellOut]

"F & A" man...I love it!

 

[langecustomgraphics]

Thanks I will try that. But is there really ever too much hot rod?

 

[artbot]

HA!

 

[Signworks of Algoma]

Love it! I love old school pinstriping! Most excellent!

 

[fmg]

Like This .... A lot.

 

[Dave Drane]

This is a something I have been working on for a moto racing team. I put team and racing in there, but it looked too busy. what do you guys think? Thanks for your opinion.

I don't think it looks racy enough for the end user... Nice but not really suitable

 

[Fatboy]

I think it looks hot.Well done Dave

 

[Jillbeans]

I don't think it's suitable either, too tearoom looking.
If you are going to use it, tighten it up and tone down the white parts in the pinstriping cliparts to grey. They should just be accents.
I don't think that font has an actual ampersand, which could help it to look more concise.
Love....Jill

 

[Gino]

I like it, but I would advise to make the flared ‘F’ not as you have it. To me it looks odd. The ’A’ is fine. I’d also make ‘and’ smaller, thus closing up the gap somewhat. People’s subliminal will automatically put the ‘and’ in there somehow…….

I really like the name !! That was a saying I grew up using and still use to this day…… :Oops:

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[Perks]

Good job! Whats does it look like with the other words?

 

[langecustomgraphics]

Thanks for all your input! I made the AND smaller, tried the ampersand, and tried the what Jill suggested.

 

[modernmav]

personally I like the 3rd version (the way jill suggested)

 

[Sign Up Graphics]

Sign Up Graphics

Looks good!!!

 

[jscarl]

Man it is a real toss up between #2 & #3. I like the outlines in #2. Is it going onto a black substrate?

 

[mountainmang]

#2 rocks

 

[Big Blue]

2 is much better than 3

 

[GypsyGraphics]

I like this very much. Just a thought though, on versions 2 or 3...what if you modified the arm of the "F" to wrap around the "&."
this is just a quickie mod, you probably want to adjusts the spacing some.

Or maybe even modify both the arm of the "F" and the crossbar of the "A" to a custom shape around the "&"

 

[Sign_Boy]

GG did good - Like the flow of it