put me on the spot why don't you lugg...
ok just my opinions..on the business cards i'm not sold on the font choices under your logo working down through the list of services and your name...i'm just not sold on the font choices. i love your logo, it is a great representation of your style..if you were not a '
sign' shop i would say that your logo is a
sign and it is a
sign..but it works for me because you are a
sign company (did that make any sense at all?)
on the window layout...again i am not sold on the font choice for the list of services. i would also like to see a version of the 'we make you look good' without the white outline..if you could post one of those side by side it would be interesting, to me there is a little bit of an optical effect happening that makes it a little hard on my eyes for whatever reason.
on the van. the 'stand out from the crowd' the line beneath that in the band "with vehicle wraps'...those two pieces do not read as one to me but rather as two separate peices because of the way they are laid out...in my opinion the 'with vehicle wraps' may not even be needed except for the purpose of planting a seed with a client to sell them on wraps...if that is the case i think you need to rework them so that they read as one item and not two.
my only other comment would be again in reference to the bottom band/stripe...i like the band on the van but the text in it just isnt working for me, i feel like whatever goes in that band needs to run the length of the vehicle not just a small blurb in the center..just doesnt balance out for me.
i can visualize your web address in that band.
i am seeing very separate items on the van 3 separate components they just aren't flowing together for me...doesnt look bad. but i've said it before .. i am familiar enough with your work that i can tell when you are struggling with a project and i can tell you are forcing this one. i don't mean this negatively, because it doesnt look bad i'm just not seeing your style yet.
don't force yourself. take your time and work it until you are happy with it. you are an amazing designer. i would rather see you do something temporarily until you are happy with something permanent than to settle.