Layout Critique

[Patrick46]

I like it, but would slightly break it up to read "The Best Drinks in Town...and Stuff for the Kids Too!"

 

[Tiki]

Maybe Slant the oval a little and make it a darker color

 

[Marlene]

I really like the colors and the retro look of it

 

[Steve C.]

Maybe Slant the oval a little and make it a darker color

I like the way you bounced the Script ....

 

[Replicator]

Luggnut. Jillbeans and tikiboyz . . . I really loved your examples and everyone else's suggestions and comments too.

I took it all to heart, but my design time on this project was FREE, and it is just a banner after all . . . Here's what she decided on, and I'm OK with it !

 

[Gino]

Well, I like that a whole lot better than your first one.

 

[gabagoo]

I like em all!!!!

 

[signgal]

Cute! and I'm the customer she's after ... mmmmmm mocha cappuccino and a scone, please!

 

[visualeyez]

If you are printing that thing throw some more gradient color fades and simulated depth into the mix. Solid color shadows are weak.

 

[Jillbeans]

Damn I reallllly love what Tiki did to that!
He balanced the info and made the whole thing pop.
Lugg's looks real "coffee" like and inviting.
And the latest Rep version has more punch, altho I'd have lost the cliparts.

 

[Marlene]

love the new font you used Rep. I don't mind that clipart as it has the feel of the retro look and goes pretty good with the rest. really nice looking design!